you should post it in the comments and critque thread...
i think its ok..i would darken the blue a bit behind them abd add a lil smudge to the right character behind his head like you have it on the other character.
Dam it dam it! I knew the writing was too small, but stupid Wii chat wont let me make it bigger!
That white bright thing around him is chakra, its an energy flow that allows him to do stuff, watch the show Naruto and you will get it, its really a great show. PM me if you wanna know more lol