Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

[Giggles]

uhm, yah, i forgot to mention, that was my 1st time using photoshop aswell, i dont even know the tools yet -.-

 

[RivalDestiny]

uhm, yah, i forgot to mention, that was my 1st time using photoshop aswell, i dont even know the tools yet -.-

Look around google for some tutorials, they might help...

(Don't worry, I'm not good with PS as well :lol.

 

[Syntax]

As I mentioned above use the points mentioned by both ssbb_lover and I as a guide on improving. For example, ask yourself questions similar to the points mentioned above about the next signature you make.

 

[Sethoi]

First sig made with GIMP constructive criticism please!

 

[Byuakuya]

First sig made with GIMP constructive criticism please!

It looks nice for a first piece, but here are a few tips:

- Get rid of the white line around the render by blurring the edges.
- Blend the render and the text in a little more.
- Also, the render appears to be very bright, so tone down the lighting a little.

I hope that I wasn't too harsh.

 

[iRAWR]

and that white lining around dark samus..try and get rid of it

 

[Syntax]

@Sethoi

- Erase the line effects done over top of the render
- Blend in the render with the background
- Make the render a bit darker
- Use a smaller text font, right now it seems that the focal point of the signature is on the text
- Blend in the text with the rest of the signature

Overall good attempt.

 

[ssbb_lover]

It looks nice for a first piece, but here are a few tips:

- Get rid of the white line around the render by blurring the edges.
- Blend the render and the text in a little more.
- Also, the render appears to be very bright, so tone down the lighting a little.

I hope that I wasn't too harsh.

Oh purleez, Pras. Don't be such a nice guy all the time, toughen up. I love ya man, but sometimes you're a little too soft.

Sethoi:

- Tone down the lighting a bit
- Re-cut your render, that white lines is really annoying
- Work on the colors
- Work on the text font, color, and placement
- Add a C4d

Last one is optional.

 

[Monsteroids]

First sig made with GIMP constructive criticism please!

Select Samus go to Script-Fu->Selection->Fade outline

Replace the 10 at the top with 1 and see how that turns out. Then blur and only go through the outside once or twice.

Don't use fractal brushes on that.

Your lighting is too strong

Smaller more suitable font

C4ds are a pain! hmph...

 

[Byuakuya]

Oh purleez, Pras. Don't be such a nice guy all the time, toughen up. I love ya man, but sometimes you're a little too soft.

Yeah, I know what you mean, but I just don't want to crush their work along with their confidence. I mean, I could criticise your work fairly and vise versa, but I just don't feel right when I criticise too much on first-time pieces.

 

[Sethoi]

Thanks!

I'l try and doo all of them when I get the time.

P.S. C4D's drive me nuts..

 

[iRAWR]

how??? they make some sigs look better..and maybe less emptier

 

[ssbb_lover]

C4D's are godly.

Yeah, I know what you mean, but I just don't want to crush their work along with their confidence. I mean, I could criticise your work fairly and vise versa, but I just don't feel right when I criticise too much on first-time pieces.

I get you.

And I can't help it, since you're so good with grammar...you spell "criticize" with a 'Z', not an 'S'. Hehe...that is, unless where you live, you spell "criticize" with an 'S', I've seen that.

 

[Byuakuya]

C4D's are godly.

I get you.

And I can't help it, since you're so good with grammar...you spell "criticize" with a 'Z', not an 'S'. Hehe...that is, unless where you live, you spell "criticize" with an 'S', I've seen that.

Here in the UK, it is spelt that way. There are some differences to how some words are spelt within the UK and the US. Another classic example would be "Center" and "Centre".

 

[ssbb_lover]

Here in the UK, it is spelt that way. There are some differences to how some words are spelt within the UK and the US. Another classic example would be "Center" and "Centre".

:-O Well...ø_ø

You might want to post your sig here so people can evaluate it.