Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

All i can do is animate pictures and add text. I don't have photoshop:frown2:

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Those are all animated by me. But the picture isn't made by me....
 
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mushroomedmario said:
what about my text, i tried to kinda make it in the flow of the trees.....
It's, uhh...really blurry...
 
For you're first signature it's ok.. I would suggest on checking out some various tutorials for blending in renders, adding a border, backgrounds and ones for making a full signature..

Honest review of your signature.

- Render has been stretched too much
- Render positioning could be better
- Background doesn't match the render
- Background needs lots of improvement
- Text is too plain
- Text should blend in with the background
- Try downloading some fonts from www.dafont.com
- Signature has too much negative space
- Signature could use a border

If you have any questions feel free to ask. Also try not to take what I've said as an insult. Rather view it as a checklist of improvements that can be completed with practice.
 
Green, Yellow, Red, Blue, Orange, and the render's colors...they don't work. Haha.

- Background is bad
- Boring Background
- Render is stretched WAY too much
- Text is blurry and droll
- No border?...
- No techniques used, seems like just some airbrushing on a green bg
- Effects on the render IS A NO-NO.
- etc. :/

What did you make it in?
 
ssbb_lover said:
Green, Yellow, Red, Blue, Orange, and the render's colors...they don't work. Haha.

- Background is bad
- Boring Background
- Render is stretched WAY too much
- Text is blurry and droll
- No border?...
- No techniques used, seems like just some airbrushing on a green bg
- Effects on the render IS A NO-NO.
- etc. :/

What did you make it in?

Rofl, devin, don't listen to himm! AHHH. <3
Jk, he gives great advices. :) But.. like,
don't take what he says, seriously.. Lol.
Even though.. I don't think you care, because
you're.. devin :) rofl But yeah, for your first
sig EVER? not bad.. at all.
Render = picture.
 
WiiWouldLike2Play said:

Rofl, devin, don't listen to himm! AHHH. <3
Jk, he gives great advices. :) But.. like,
don't take what he says, seriously.. Lol.
Even though.. I don't think you care, because
you're.. devin :) rofl But yeah, for your first
sig EVER? not bad.. at all.
Render = picture.

Come on Steppy, he is a big boy, he can handle himself.

Harsh critique makes man outa kids:lol:
 
WiiWouldLike2Play said:

Rofl, devin, don't listen to himm! AHHH. <3
Jk, he gives great advices. :) But.. like,
don't take what he says, seriously.. Lol.
Even though.. I don't think you care, because
you're.. devin :) rofl But yeah, for your first
sig EVER? not bad.. at all.
Render = picture.
:)

I'm harsh, but I'm supposed to be harsh. -_-' It's how you get better; YOU GIRL.
 
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