Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

...the gundam/transformers sig (i can't tell) is pretty good

sprite sig - 3/10

gundam/transformers sig - 8/10

my latest...

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i was going to put a vid in, but i didn't feel like it...
 
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1. Texture doesn't look good.
2. I don't really know what is going on in the right side of the signature.
3. Poor text. Could use a lot more work instead of bevel and emboss + inner glow.

Suggestions:

1. Try looking for some new text tutorials. Try ones that help blend the text in with the rest of the signature. If necessary download some new fonts over at www.dafont.com

2. Work on the backgrounds. So far your backgrounds could use a lot of improvement. Try looking up some different tutorials that can help you improve your signature making.

3. Try to use different renders. Also try to have the renders you use blend in with the rest of the signature.

Overall: 1-2/10
 
iRAWR said:
lol i post my sigs in the critique secton..around 2 people come and say some stuff....which is pretty lame if you ask me =(... 2 PEOPLE wtf..

anyways noone really criticed this one so...

LATEST:

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used demon's tut for this one...
I like the 1st one, even though simple. VERY nice flow. Take that ghey orange C4D out of the bottom right. Text kills it. If the text was better and you replace the orange C4D...9/10. :) Sprite sig isn't good at all. :S It is a cool technique when used correctly, try again (I always follow a tutorial until I get an outcome I like, then I "put it in my book of techniques" for later).
Gamerdude247 said:
...the gundam/transformers sig (i can't tell) is pretty good

sprite sig - 3/10

gundam/transformers sig - 8/10

my latest...

onepieceluffysignaturegd2473.jpg


i was going to put a vid in, but i didn't feel like it...
1st: BEING A SLOTH IS NOT A GOOD THING BOY. NO LAZINESS.

Now, your sig.

LQ (low quality)
Bad background
Bad colors
No depth, very flat
You're making 2 focal points (the render and the text) whether you meant to or not...that's bad. You need to make the sig based on one or the other.

That's really I can say....:/ 1/10
 
I order you all to pwn me naoooo.

@ wiismurf, widen that bar on the bottom, and make it thinner at the top. Would help depth a lot.

@gamerdude. I myself find that text appealing, if only it wasn't on THAT tag...
I don't get the right thing at all. It's a bit TOO abstract for me.

And it might be blasphemy, but it's a bit too dodge/burn'd for my taste.

LOL, I need to work on the B part of TBBH.

@ everyone. anyone got a *cough*
torrent link
For CS2 for me? I'm not going to say PS is more powerful than GIMP. But I need to be able to decipher tuts more easily.
 
the video ruined it, i dont like the text, the white/black strip....take it off, render doesn't really blend in

4.5/10
 
Gustav1939 said:
This is just a real simple sig, nothing too fancy, but do you like?

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Its basic, but if its your first or second attempt, then it looks good. But keep popping into the GFX section and you will find yourself improving automatically.
 
Gustav1939 said:
This is just a real simple sig, nothing too fancy, but do you like?

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hmm nt bad for a first try or so, though BG needs alot of work so try a few tuts, also im not a big fan of animations,they can look good but all too often distract from the focal of the sig.
 
@ Gustav..

I would remove the texture/effects off of Sonic..
 
ssbb_lover said:
Pras, nice sig.

Also, Cappin', that sig...it's a 2. ;D I do have to agree that Ricky can be cocky, but he grades fairly 99.9% of the time.

Not only do I agree with that, but I would also add that he admitted himself he rushed it. You don't just say "this is bad, this is bad, this is bad, this is bad, this is bad...but I do kind of like this. Good try. 6/10" Ricky is harsh like me, much of the reason I like him, he doesn't hold back at all. That's how you do a little thing called "learning". Demonflair has always been harsh with me, and i've gotten better because of the emphasis he put on certain things (learn clipping masks, work on colors, etc.). TBBH <333333333

For kicks:

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C&C :S

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Yeah, that's what I'm talking about, being harsh get's you to know what you are really failing to do.. what you can't do, or what you need to do.

Like Mike said, we feel like amazing artists, but when you go to a top site like PR, and we have those kind of critiques ouch.. but it helps :rolleyes:

Tyler, it's good. But you still need to work more on texts, depth, lighting, colors and effects.

iRAWR, the transformers sig is good, seeing from what you can do. I think you could work better on the colors, add some gradient maps, photofilters, work with hue/saturation, try more stuff..
And that text is very bad, kinda of ruins the whole thing.

The sprite sig is eheh good because you used my tut. :lol:

EDIT*

Forgot to post my latest works.

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Automatically went into one of my favs, I love the concept, effects, colors, and depth. I think it came out nice. What ya think? :)

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A failure attempt to try that style again..

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Awwwwww Yeaaaahhhh

Personally love this one. It's a vector, made from scratch, only thing I followed was the spike, the rest came from my head :p

It's a logo for my and Mike's new team, Demented Ninjas.

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In this one I wanted to work more on smudges, effects, flow, and depth.
I quite like the stock (looks cool), and I think the sig came out good.
 
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