Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

Heres My Latest. Made it in like 30 minutes because I was Rushed off my PC lol
C&C Please
Abit bigger than my usual size at 400x130 because I wanted a change
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Brawny said:
Dang, I thought I left this place, but it keeps dragging me back. I need some desperate C&C....I've been pumping these things out like mad. This is my work over a 3 day period. Bear in mind, I merged a LOT of tuts, that is why they actually look half-way decent (at least IMO before you guys go crazy on them)

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Yes, I know about the blurred hair and elbow

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This one turned out horribly, so feel free to mock it! haha

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C&C Case File 1: Mr.Kwon 'Adam byung Peacock' Smith-san

Number 1:

Looks painfully simple, render, motion blur, lighting, but I think it turned out pretty nice so I would give it 7/10

Number 2:

Meh I think it is a great idea and it is pulled off ok but maybe you could alter some of the visability so that you get the lines on the triforce rsther then behind 7/10

Number 3:

I hate it, it has a lot going on and the overlays ain't up to much. I just hate it 2/10

Number 4:

This turned out pretty nice, it could of been better like some bits aint done as good as they could but I like it 7/10

Number 5:

I hate it, due to a few reasons such as, it doesnt look good, too bright for my liking and you stole my render and effect. You didnt know you stole them but you still stole them:lol: 3/10

Number 6:

I like it, the Bg looks ok, not to busy, render fitted in well and I like the weapon coming from him. Maybe change the perspective at some points on the weapon or try and that would make it a hell of a lot better.

Number 7:

To be honest with this one I don't like it, the little isnt working at all, the bg is bad and the render isnt up to much either. 2/10

Number 8:

I'd rather not talk about it to be honest. 2/10 for being honest:lol:

Number 9:

Umm this one is iffy in my mind, I like the idea and some parts but I didnt really like the finish product. Also you didnt write chewbacca like I told you:nonod: 4.5/10 I suppose

Number 10:

Meh, dont like it, lighting is good how to put it but it doesnt work but you improved with lighting skills these 3 days. This sig I just dont warm to it I hate it 3/10

Number 11:

I can't decide if I like this or not so I will just go 5/10

[Not Top Secret]
 
Wii_Smurf said:
Heres My Latest. Made it in like 30 minutes because I was Rushed off my PC lol
C&C Please
Abit bigger than my usual size at 400x130 because I wanted a change
HumanTorchJPEG.jpg
That looks very nice man. Nice use of the render, cool BG and yes, the size change for this type of Sig was a great idea. Overall: 8/10. :)
 
Wii_Smurf said:
Heres My Latest. Made it in like 30 minutes because I was Rushed off my PC lol
C&C Please
Abit bigger than my usual size at 400x130 because I wanted a change
HumanTorchJPEG.jpg

Looks LQ.
Lacks depth.
Lacks effects.
Bg is boring.
Work on colors.
Text fits very badly.
There are some random lines in there, which makes the render stand out less.
Work on the focal.

2/10
 
demonflair said:
Looks LQ.
Lacks depth.
Lacks effects.
Bg is boring.
Work on colors.
Text fits very badly.
There are some random lines in there, which makes the render stand out less.
Work on the focal.

2/10

No offence but if you didnt make it, then its crap in your opinion. Your getting too ahead of yourself, yes you can be harsh but seriously, a 2?
 
Cpt.McCloud said:
No offence but if you didnt make it, then its crap in your opinion. Your getting too ahead of yourself, yes you can be harsh but seriously, a 2?

All I said is what I feel about that sig man..

I'm sure Ben can do better than that.
I recommend that you read some tuts dude, you will see yourself improving much faster.
 
Pras, nice sig.

Also, Cappin', that sig...it's a 2. ;D I do have to agree that Ricky can be cocky, but he grades fairly 99.9% of the time.
Demonflair said:
Looks LQ.
Lacks depth.
Lacks effects.
Bg is boring.
Work on colors.
Text fits very badly.
There are some random lines in there, which makes the render stand out less.
Work on the focal.
Not only do I agree with that, but I would also add that he admitted himself he rushed it. You don't just say "this is bad, this is bad, this is bad, this is bad, this is bad...but I do kind of like this. Good try. 6/10" Ricky is harsh like me, much of the reason I like him, he doesn't hold back at all. That's how you do a little thing called "learning". Demonflair has always been harsh with me, and i've gotten better because of the emphasis he put on certain things (learn clipping masks, work on colors, etc.). TBBH <333333333

For kicks:

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C&C :S

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Cpt.McCloud said:
No offence but if you didnt make it, then its crap in your opinion. Your getting too ahead of yourself, yes you can be harsh but seriously, a 2?
Jokes aside, once you've joined PR, you can't lie to people and be nice to 'em no more :) it's all harsh critique over there = great stuff. Hard to get someone to improve when they're told they're amazing when they're not (something I had to put up with for half a year.. until I realised I sucked). Though that obviously doesn't give the someone the excuse to say someone else's sig 'sucks' for no reason.
Edit: Tyler get yo' arse on MSN.
 
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Wiired said:
Jokes aside, once you've joined PR, you can't lie to people and be nice to 'em no more :) it's all harsh critique over there = great stuff. Hard to get someone to improve when they're told they're amazing when they're not (something I had to put up with for half a year.. until I realised I sucked).
Beat you *****. :p
 
ssbb_lover said:
Beat you *****. :p

You have 10 seconds to get your arse on msn before I hunt you down:)

Meh, I might stick to GFX doing something every now and again when I got free time but probably wont get emerged in it, not my area.
 
you could always make a pattern if you had to.

Monster, gradient maps/gradient overlay. Need to up that focal point a bit with some better lighting. Text could be better?

Still a pretty nice sig.

woops, this is to the gamerdude on "scan lines"
 
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Bah I liked that Sig aswell. I'll work on it use some Tutorials =/

Edit: No Tutorials Yet just messed with colours. Here ya go

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NEW SIGNATURE

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nice smurf,

7.5/10

...and does anybody know how to put the lines in your sig, like in monsteroids spiderman sig?
 
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demonflair said:
Yeah, Mike's right. You must be unaware of what a great/legend sig is Ryan.. I've seen some incredible sigs with no use of C4Ds, they're incredible probably because they don't have C4Ds too. :wink:

And same here, joined PR because of real C&C and for some other reasons.
You people need to learn allot really, we all need.

Oh and Ryan, to give you an example of a great sig without a C4D, a sig with a great concept.

lol i post my sigs in the critique secton..around 2 people come and say some stuff....which is pretty lame if you ask me =(... 2 PEOPLE wtf..

anyways noone really criticed this one so...

LATEST:

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used demon's tut for this one...
 
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