Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

Sneaux, I like how you reworked the LP stock, I think it looks great.


Pras, I like it, but next time try putting some crazy effects and whatnot. Yes? :)
 
Sneaux I love the LP one...

And Byu, very nice. I would just love some effects in there...

CnC on current?
Not so good I know. I did it in about 5-10 minutes...
 
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  • Canvas size is too large IMO
  • TRY NEW STYLES OF TEXT AND WAYS OF INCORPORATING IT
  • Definitely need more effects for such a gray/bland sig (work more with that electric blue color)
  • I do like the way you made his hands in color, clever
  • Needs better depth
  • Darken the bottom right side of the sig and you'll have a better looking light source
 
ssbb_lover said:
  • Canvas size is too large IMO
  • TRY NEW STYLES OF TEXT AND WAYS OF INCORPORATING IT
  • Definitely need more effects for such a gray/bland sig (work more with that electric blue color)
  • I do like the way you made his hands in color, clever
  • Needs better depth
  • Darken the bottom right side of the sig and you'll have a better looking light source

I agree. But it is great originality though XD
 
I agree. Just making the canvas size smaller (in width, not height) would make it awesome.
 
Well, before I read your tips I started and finished this one.
So here it is:
V1
FATE.png

V2
FATE2copy.png
 
Do you make that circle by eliptical marquee tool, stroke, and outer glow ? Or with apply image ?
 
ssbb_lover said:
Sneaux, I like how you reworked the LP stock, I think it looks great.


Pras, I like it, but next time try putting some crazy effects and whatnot. Yes? :)

Popert said:
Sneaux I love the LP one...

And Byu, very nice. I would just love some effects in there...

CnC on current?
Not so good I know. I did it in about 5-10 minutes...
I was actually going for a simple Sig, since some of my earlier pieces were over-loaded with effects to some extent. But I guess you guys prefer to see some over-the-top effects in there. :lol:
 
The lines on the right, omit them or change the color and make them blend better.
The red circle is also a bit distracting (unless that was the intended focal point), I'd suggest changing the color to make it blend.

The background is a bit bland, lacks depth...
Text is decent.

Overall, work on colors and blending. :yesnod:
(And I'm one to talk. ¬_¬)



I decided to whip something up for PR's NSotW (Freestyle + the word "Philosophy" in there), but it didn't come out as I hoped...
lolz-ugh.gif


CloudsPhilsophy.png




Didn't really like the colors, so made a b/w
CloudsPhilsophybw.png
 
My newest -
sig207.png


c/c

Mark : The two lines on both sides of the focal are very MS Paintish looking. Also, the focal colors don't really match the rest of the sig. I really like the B/W one though; it shows that it has a lot of potential.
 
M@gicM@rk said:
The lines on the right, omit them or change the color and make them blend better.
The red circle is also a bit distracting (unless that was the intended focal point), I'd suggest changing the color to make it blend.

The background is a bit bland, lacks depth...
Text is decent.

Overall, work on colors and blending. :yesnod:
(And I'm one to talk. ¬_¬)



I decided to whip something up for PR's NSotW (Freestyle + the word "Philosophy" in there), but it didn't come out as I hoped...
lolz-ugh.gif


CloudsPhilsophy.png




Didn't really like the colors, so made a b/w
CloudsPhilsophybw.png

too sharpened.....
 

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