Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

[ssbb_lover]

Awesome job, Gym. Lovin the 2nd one.

I agree.
Start using stocks instead of making bg with filters..

I agree you agree.

 

[demonflair]

Few of my latest:

I still haven't started on a SOTW entry though...

1st is awesome, probably the best imo.. was it pen tool only?? Vector??

2nd is cool, and the third is also very conceptual and original.
Very good job Gym.

Underwater Feel:

 

[iRAWR]

i dont really feel the underwater in there :idea:

 

[Mario Famous]

Its too bright, thats all. Good work...Lol, sorry if this post sounds vague.

 

[demonflair]

i dont really feel the underwater in there :idea:

:shocked:


@Mario Famous, hm.. It's only bright in the focal, as I believe that it is a light source.
Anyway, thanks for pointing that out.

 

[King Wiired]

1st is awesome, probably the best imo.. was it pen tool only?? Vector??

2nd is cool, and the third is also very conceptual and original.
Very good job Gym.

Underwater Feel:

I like it, but I'd like it even more if it got darker further away from the light source, if you get what I'm saying.. 'cause it seems to be bright at once part, then a sort of dorment colour (I know that does happen in real life) but just think it getting darker would look better. Don't really like the text either but otherwise it's great, good job.

 

[demonflair]

I like it, but I'd like it even more if it got darker further away from the light source, if you get what I'm saying.. 'cause it seems to be bright at once part, then a sort of dorment colour (I know that does happen in real life) but just think it getting darker would look better. Don't really like the text either but otherwise it's great, good job.

Bah you people bashing me away because of the text :sick: jk

I'm glad you like it Mike, and I know what you mean, I guess I'll do some new version later. What do you suggest?? A black radial gradient to create some more shadows??

 

[ssbb_lover]

New shmiggy.

Critique away.

 

[Popert]

@ ssbb lover
I like it, nice colors and effects, but text is hard to read

@demonflair

This is my result from your tut

I know text doesnt match very much, just needed somethin manly in there

 

[demonflair]

New shmiggy.

Critique away.

No focal, no depth, render doesn't blend the bg, effects could have some more work, text needs work, the Triforce ruins the tag, and I don't know why but I hate the bg, maybe because it has a bad depth (oversharpened) and I don't like the colors.
Lighting is good though.

In overall, 3/10

Tyler, you can do alot better than this, buy some tuts, mine *cough
They will put you in the next level.


Off Topic:

Have you pmed DL Reality?? I don't know, but he has been off in the last two days.. dunno why..
Hope you will be accepted on the team

@Popert, the tut is a bit advanced to you mate, as you can see that your outcome is in no way near from my outcome. Try reading free tuts, then buy some tuts after you improve a bit.
But post it in the thread and thanks for buying it.

 

[Popert]

@Popert, the tut is a bit advanced to you mate, as you can see that your outcome is in no way near from my outcome. Try reading free tuts, then buy some tuts after you improve a bit.
But post it in the thread and thanks for buying it.

Yeah a bit advanced, some of the stuff like masking I didnt get :lol: but Im going to keep reading tuts and such :yesnod: Thanks again! I learned a bit!

 

[ssbb_lover]

Lawl, I know it. I tried using a tut + 10 of my own random techniques cuz i'm crazy like that. I understand, good critique. And I WOULD buy some shitte if I had points.

 

[demonflair]

Yeah a bit advanced, some of the stuff like masking I didnt get :lol: but Im going to keep reading tuts and such :yesnod: Thanks again! I learned a bit!

It looks like you learnt a bit, yeah..
It's always good to see someone posting their outcomes, when the tut has our sig eheh..
I didn't made the tut, someone from my team made it

 

[demonflair]

Lawl, I know it. I tried using a tut + 10 of my own random techniques cuz i'm crazy like that. I understand, good critique. And I WOULD buy some shitte if I had points.

Then go post like a whore jeez.. :sick:

And never mix many techniques, the answer is in your "sig thingy"..

EDIT*

I FREAKIN MADE A DOUBLE POST

 

[Popert]

Ugh I do not get the freakin pen tool! :sick: How do I set it to brush and it wont let me click stroke path :mad5: can someone please help?