Saviors of the Ultimatum: Sign-up and Discussion

[WMBQ]

WMBQ i have one question do i have to type alot 4 spyro to be done or a little?

Add a bit more to the personality section and a bit more than that to the description section. You're gonna have to write quite a bit more for the history section.

I am going to make an evil character. Well let's say he's a mercenary for Cateraun.

Just remember that he has to be a video game character.

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Fantastic sign-ups, both of you. Accepted for both!

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I'm afraid this is not adequate... not only is it incredibly confusing, but it's also too short to pass. You're going to have to rework this to be accepted.

 

[WMBQ]

Sorry, this is kind of poorly written... you should get the point though.

NAME: Cateraun

GAME: Saviors of the Ultimatum

AGE: 56

PICTURE: N/A

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
Cateraun is, most notably, 7 feet tall. This was the result of a dark spell that he cast upon himself as a young wizard. The spell caused him to grow continuously without ever decaying. In addition to the unstopped growth, he also reaped eternal youth from this spell.

Because of his descent into the dark arts, his skin has gone from a healthy human brown to a dark gray. His evil, beady eyes suffered the same effect, changing them from their natural green to pale gray. His hair is tangled, oily, thin, and jet black. Because he rarely trims it, it falls down to his shoulders.

He wears exactly what any Foraoan king would wear—a green robe with gold trimmings over comfortable day clothes with black boots, and a crown on his head. However, he changed to colors to his liking, toning them down to a monochrome of gray, with the crown being changed to the same jet black of his hair.

PERSONALITY:
Cateraun is pure evil. Everything he does means something only to himself—if he acts kind or gives something away to someone, he is merely manipulating them. His actions are always directly linked to conquering some independent section of Forao, and he is lethally efficient. An expert at keeping in power, he often shocks his victims into submission by massacring innocents.

To keep political power, Cateraun will often kidnap princes and princesses of various states in Forao, as political alliances were made exclusively by marrying the offspring of kings, and alliances are threats to his reign. He would kill the princes and keep the princesses for his own purposes.

He is also an expert at manipulating powerful and materialistic individuals by giving them land in exchange for their service as destroyers of rebellion. When he is finished with them, he will often kill them outright to avoid them rising up against him in an act of mutiny. He is an expert at keeping their deaths quiet so that no one sees the certain demise of pledging loyalty to him.

Lastly, he is a strict Varenist—a religion that worships Varen, the Foraoan god of evil and dark magic. As such, he doesn’t believe in Nintendo, and is fully unaware of the Ultimatum. Even if he were, he would likely ignore it and continue his evil ways.

HISTORY:
Cateraun was born to a great wizard who was a member of the Sages. At the early age of nine years, he began rebelling against his fairly strict father, a practitioner of light magic, by doing the exact opposite and practicing dark magic in secret. He quickly found himself to have a natural skill for it, and by the time he was sixteen, he was stronger than his father. A year later, he decided that he was capable of caring for himself, and he mercilessly killed both of his parents.

He quickly ran away from the other Sages to find work in a nearby city called Meronne. For three years, he worked as a dream interpreter, making money by giving people false, often morbid, meanings of their dreams. Throughout this period, he was growing stronger and stronger in dark magic, until he was strong enough to travel to Capital City some 120 miles away and singlehandedly storm the royal palace. After massacring the royal family, he declared himself king and killed all initial protestors.

It took him five years to establish his position, as his takeover had been sudden, but once he did, he began taking over other parts of Forao at once. Within five years, at the age of 29, Cateraun owned more territory and citizens than any other king in all of Forao. Ever since then, he has been slowly adding to his territory and breaking the spirit of all rebels.

TRAITS:
In addition to his political and military intelligence, Cateraun is a dark wizard, meaning he can cast hexes, curses, and other spells of destructive or self-indulgent nature. He is extremely skilled, and considered the best ever in the short, 200 year history of Forao. As aforementioned, he has acquired eternal youth, and cannot die of longevity.

He is also incredibly adaptive. He is able to figure our weak points in an instant, even if his foe is completely foreign. He also figures out how to use new technology or spells with little trouble whatsoever.

 

[spyro king]

ok.Charactar: Shadow the hegdehog \Game: Sonic series \age: about 20\Picture: http://ui09.gamespot.com/1480/shadowth0081280x1024_2.jpgshadow has a personality that is totaly unknown what he is thinking. he is sonic's rival but he has helped him in the past. he is not "good" but he will defend what is his. \History: Shadow's history remains a mystery, but he is a artificial being created by a human. he is still working on discovering his past, but he has found many things out. he can do many strange things like chaos control and more.
im sorry i can't space it very well.
ummm, id think he is a good guy.

hes more of an anti hero

 

[her01771]

yea my cpu is being stupid. it wont let me space and work correctly. i will remake it and post it back, ok?
he wants to defend whats his. thats why i said that. i wanna reserve him too plz.

 

[GigaRidley]

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Sorry man, but a little too short. You're gonna have to beef it up before I accept you.

Also, I think I'm gonna make Ridley my villain... but then again, maybe not, I've already RP'ed as him plenty. Any suggestions?

 

[her01771]

hmmm, u should do ridley and another,btw ppl: DONT FORGET BOWSER'S KOOPALINGS!

 

[Blair D.]

Character: Bowser Jr. (I HAD to use a bigger picture, because that was the only picture that would work.)
Game: Super Mario Sunshine
Age: 8.
Picture:

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Physical Description: He might not look like a tough guy, but he is more powerful than you think. He has red hair, sharp tiny teeth, and a cloth with a drawing of a monster's mouth on it.
Personality: Bowser Jr. is exactely like his father, Bowser. Mean and always wants to kidnap the princess. He wants to destroy Mario.
History: Bowser Jr. is the son of Bowser (obviously). He is the eighth and youngest child of Bowser's children (how can he get so many children? And where is the wife?). Bowser Jr. first showed up in Super Mario Sunshine.
Traits: Bowser Jr. can use his Magic Paint brush for making paint-like goop.

 

[Bowserizer]

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Sorry man, but a little too short. You're gonna have to beef it up before I accept you.

Also, I think I'm gonna make Ridley my villain... but then again, maybe not, I've already RP'ed as him plenty. Any suggestions?

My suggestion is to use one character. :x

We have so many as it is, don't want it to become the Majestic 12 again. I really don't see how having one character is so hard for people to begin with. It also provides more of an RP feel when you're only controlling the actions of one character.

I'll do my Grodus sign up after dinner.

 

[spyro king]

name:spyro the dragon
game:spyro dawn of the dragon
age:15 i guess
picture:

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physical description:spyro is sorta big and he is the only purple dragon with big horns and sorta big wings and has sharp claws
personality:Spyro is young and compassionate for others and he is always willing to help them no matter what happens. Spyro doesn't asks for rewards and is just happy to be a big help to those in danger. He is adventurous, curious about his past and eager to shape his future.*His parents seemingly*were killed by Malefor but his egg was saved by Ignitus years later a dragonfly family would care about him. Spyro shows the recklessness of an adolescent at times, but is slowly growing into the role of a leader of a proud species so overall he's a nice guy unless u get on his bad side then he's pretty mean
history:spyro was born from an egg in the swamp and he was rised by dragonflys but one day he set off on an quest to save the world from cynder and also freeing the dragon elders from her hands has he saved the elders he gained lighting ice and earth breaths when he saved all the elders he was ready to take on cynder after fighting cynder spyro saves her from dying about a few years later he grew up and became a real dragon (he can fly) and met hunter hunter warned him about a new threat (i dont no what it is i never played dawn of the dragon) and spyro helped hunter defeat this monster cynder teamed up with spyro and hunter to defeat the monster spyro also has a power inside of him that lets him unleash his ture power called fury in his past adventures spyro fought many bad guys such as red and ripto he always has his best friend sparx with him if something happens to sparx spyro will do anything to get him back during his adventures he met a stubborn bear called moneybags who always got in spyros way forcing him to pay a amount of gems to advance on his quest
traits:since spyro is a dragon he can fly to places no one else could so he can also breath fire so if a ice block was in the way he could melt it and he also has fury witch can let him unleash his ture power
how detailed is that?

this is my work so far now Wmbq

 

[Espmaster_]

ok.Charactar: Shadow the hegdehog \Game: Sonic series \age: about 20\Picture: http://ui09.gamespot.com/1480/shadowth0081280x1024_2.jpgshadow has a personality that is totaly unknown what he is thinking. he is sonic's rival but he has helped him in the past. he is not "good" but he will defend what is his. \History: Shadow's history remains a mystery, but he is a artificial being created by a human. he is still working on discovering his past, but he has found many things out. he can do many strange things like chaos control and more.
im sorry i can't space it very well.
ummm, id think he is a good guy.

Shadow ended up being good no matter what path he chose. If you did every story, you'd eventuallly onlock the final ending on Shadow the Hedgehog. HE also helped save the planet in Sonic 06. So yeah, he is technically a good guy. Also, he's 50. Or at least he was in SA2, now he would be 59. That also means Sonic is 34 (2010-1991+15), Tails is 26 (2010-1992+8), and Amy is 30 (2010-1993+12). This also means Cream is 12. Sorry TailsXCream fans, but we don't want pedophiles...

Back on topic...

I'm glad my character was accepted. Sorry for the late responce, now that school's back in I'm up to my heels.

 

[sorabrawl]

I will keep this character as a second but I will not use him instantly.


NAME: Cole McGrath
GAME: inFAMOUS, Empire City, Sony
AGE: 25 (estimate)
PICTURE: Hero appearance:

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Infamous appearance

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PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Cole's appearance changes due to his current hero status. If he's infamous (most evil), he has grey skin with veins bulging from his body. His lightning also changes to a red colour. If he is a hero, his appearance is like any other human and his lightning is blue. He wears black track suit bottoms and a yellow and black jacket. He has side pockets on his pants for items to collect or to carry with him.

PERSONALITY: Cole is a character who tries to think before acting. Cole is also very resourceful and finds ways to get around situations. He hates his back being turned on and would fight anyone who betrays him.

Cole does not want to commit himself to someone after the loss of Trish, his girlfriend. He finds it hard to trust anyone now because Zeke, his best friend, joined the other side.

He would do anything to save his world, Empire City.

HISTORY: Before he obtained his electric powers, Cole used to be working as a bike messenger. He used to have a stable life. He used to go out with his girlfriend, Trish, hang out with his best friend, Cole and have a usual diet. One day though, everything went terribly wrong.

An object called the Ray Sphere exploded and the blast caused the city to turn radioactive. They were not able to leave the world of Empire City and little aid was sent to the world. Cole for the first few weeks of chaos, post after the explosion was unconscious. Everything went bad to worse and gangs called the Reapers caused havoc in the city. They stole from stores, raped, murdered and scared the police to hiding. Nobody was in control of these gangs.

Cole woke up and saw sparks of electrical energy immerse from his body. He was freaked out at first but then after a few months, he mastered his powers. A gang overlord called Kessler fought Cole. Kessler killed Cole's girlfriend, Trish, which made Cole hate Kessler and Cole defeated Kessler with hard effort. The former bike messenger then was told by Kessler that they were the same person. Kessler killed Trish because he wanted to prepare Cole for a future enemy, who will be incredibly powerful.

Cole is now trying to protect Empire City from future harm. He will do anything to get his world back to former glory. He believes that Cateraun is the enemy that Kessler told him about.

TRAITS: Cole is a very determined character. He would do anything to get what he wants. Even something he'd regret for the rest of his life. He has the ability to heal people with his electrical powers but he also has the power to turn people's auras into energy, which kills them. He can create bombs from his powers and they cause massive damage. It can help break through walls. His downfall is that his powers come from electrical devices. He cannot use any of his powers unless he has electricity.

 

[her01771]

ok.Charactar: Shadow the hegdehog \Game: Sonic series \age: about 20\Picture: http://ui09.gamespot.com/1480/shadowth0081280x1024_2.jpgshadow has a personality that is totaly unknown what he is thinking. he is sonic's rival but he has helped him in the past. he is not "good" but he will defend what is his. \History: Shadow's history remains a mystery, but he is a artificial being created by a human. he is still working on discovering his past, but he has found many things out. he can do many strange things like chaos control and more.
im sorry i can't space it very well.
ummm, id think he is a good guy.

Shadow ended up being good no matter what path he chose. If you did every story, you'd eventuallly onlock the final ending on Shadow the Hedgehog. HE also helped save the planet in Sonic 06. So yeah, he is technically a good guy. Also, he's 50. Or at least he was in SA2, now he would be 59. That also means Sonic is 34 (2010-1991+15), Tails is 26 (2010-1992+8), and Amy is 30 (2010-1993+12). This also means Cream is 12. Sorry TailsXCream fans, but we don't want pedophiles...

Back on topic...

I'm glad my character was accepted. Sorry for the late responce, now that school's back in I'm up to my heels.

i think you mean real age. shadow's "game age" is much younger than that.i knew he wasn't really "evil" though.

 

[Espmaster_]

ok.Charactar: Shadow the hegdehog \Game: Sonic series \age: about 20\Picture: http://ui09.gamespot.com/1480/shadowth0081280x1024_2.jpgshadow has a personality that is totaly unknown what he is thinking. he is sonic's rival but he has helped him in the past. he is not "good" but he will defend what is his. \History: Shadow's history remains a mystery, but he is a artificial being created by a human. he is still working on discovering his past, but he has found many things out. he can do many strange things like chaos control and more.
im sorry i can't space it very well.
ummm, id think he is a good guy.

Shadow ended up being good no matter what path he chose. If you did every story, you'd eventuallly onlock the final ending on Shadow the Hedgehog. HE also helped save the planet in Sonic 06. So yeah, he is technically a good guy. Also, he's 50. Or at least he was in SA2, now he would be 59. That also means Sonic is 34 (2010-1991+15), Tails is 26 (2010-1992+8), and Amy is 30 (2010-1993+12). This also means Cream is 12. Sorry TailsXCream fans, but we don't want pedophiles...

Back on topic...

I'm glad my character was accepted. Sorry for the late responce, now that school's back in I'm up to my heels.

i think you mean real age. shadow's "game age" is much younger than that.i knew he wasn't really "evil" though.

I think it's better to use his real age.

@Sorabrawl: Right on dude!

 

[WMBQ]

yea my cpu is being stupid. it wont let me space and work correctly. i will remake it and post it back, ok?
he wants to defend whats his. thats why i said that. i wanna reserve him too plz.

The deed has been done

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Sorry man, but a little too short. You're gonna have to beef it up before I accept you.

Hey I can't tell if that was sarcasm or not... I know it was shorter than my Link sign-up, but is it really that bad?

Character: Bowser Jr. (I HAD to use a bigger picture, because that was the only picture that would work.)
Game: Super Mario Sunshine
Age: 8.
Picture:

Spoiler

Physical Description: He might not look like a tough guy, but he is more powerful than you think. He has red hair, sharp tiny teeth, and a cloth with a drawing of a monster's mouth on it.
Personality: Bowser Jr. is exactely like his father, Bowser. Mean and always wants to kidnap the princess. He wants to destroy Mario.
History: Bowser Jr. is the son of Bowser (obviously). He is the eighth and youngest child of Bowser's children (how can he get so many children? And where is the wife?). Bowser Jr. first showed up in Super Mario Sunshine.
Traits: Bowser Jr. can use his Magic Paint brush for making paint-like goop.

Delve more into the three biggies: description, personality and history. What you have here is an outline... make up traits if you need to, like I did for Link. Work on it some more and I'll look at it again.

My suggestion is to use one character. :x

We have so many as it is, don't want it to become the Majestic 12 again. I really don't see how having one character is so hard for people to begin with. It also provides more of an RP feel when you're only controlling the actions of one character.

I'll do my Grodus sign up after dinner.

That's a good point. That being said, in 24 hours, the expectations of sign-up quality is going to rise significantly, and only spectacular sign-ups will be accepted. The RP itself will also start sometime tomorrow.

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Much better. Accepted. Try to use this description in your posts, too!

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Hey, good job! Grammar mistakes were consistent, but not to the point that it was illegible. Either way, it's a solid sign-up. Accepted.

You seem to portray him as good here, but you also said earlier that you were going to make an evil character... Cole can go either way. Do you want him good or evil?

By the way that's a good idea for a character. I love that game ;D

 

[Bowserizer]

"It would be in your best interest to be absolutely honest with us. We X-Nauts aren't all rainbows and lollipops. I assure you, Princess, we can be quite nasty." ~Sir Grodus

NAME: Sir Grodus

GAME: Paper Mario TYD

AGE: ???

PICTURE:

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PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
Grodus is a small, plump X-Naut. His face is shielded by his large purple cloak, with yellow fringes, as well as his yellow steam-punk glasses. A large spherical headpiece sits atop his head, with a computer chip visibly seen through the front. The bit of visible skin that can be seen is white as a ghost, and little is known of what exists underneath the rest of his robes. He carries a golden staff with a computerized blue orb at the tip. He shuffles along when he moves, and is not known to make speedy getaways.

PERSONALITY:
Sir Grodus is a serious and emotionless villain who focused on nothing but total world subjugation. Grodus is completely devoted to taking control of the world. Grodus will stop at nothing to obtain his needs. Vindictive and callous, Grodus is prepared to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, even if it means killing innocent people.
Although he is externally composed in most instances, Grodus's desires make him appear insane and boarderline psychotic. Whenever Gordus is discussing or even thinking about the prospect of his plans, he goes off into a maddened laughter that becomes almost uncontrollable at some instances. He sees his minions as pathetic and inferior. Grodus himself is viewed as highly intelligent, and he uses that as leverage over his underlings and abuses them on many occasions.

HISTORY: Very little is known about Grodus’ history. He obtained his magical powers through the Shadow Sirens, who infused their powers into this staff and his very being. He channels his magic through the staff, which gives it considerably more power. His background is unknown, but maybe it shall be revealed as the story unfolds…

TRAITS:
A mechanically modified super-being, this X-Naut has many henchmen that follow his every whim. His magical powers, which are most commonly channeled through Fire, Ice, and Electricity, are used to intimidate the SSOX, the legion of soldiers which he is the ruler. He refuses to reveal his first name, and is only referred to as Sir Grodus, and nothing more.

Not that long, but there is not much available in the history department and stuff. I can add on if you wish.