Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

[Gikoku Harakami]

They both need some work, but not bad.

Ditto, though I prefer the 2nd one.

 

[ProShooter]

As it stands, the first one meshes better than the first. They both need some work, but not bad.

wait, you mean first better then second?

 

[factoR]

Id say first.

 

[ssbb_lover]

wait, you mean first better then second?

Correct.

 

[Dbomb3]

meh as ****

 

[Bio]

Brownies14: First has a more controlled composition with everything harmonious. Second shows more interesting features, but the entire piece does not come together as seamlessly as the first. Also worth noting is that the first is more like a slick Ad where the second has more artistic direction.

Pick your poison, I suppose.

 

[Dbomb3]

wow why isnt my sig showing up?

highlight it and youll see the box...

 

[Bio]

^Your sig (it features Master Chief) is visible.

 

[Bodine]

A lot going on I know

not going for the usual look I go for, wanted to try something different.

 

[factoR]

Dbomb: Not liking the colors and the text. Flow is decent. And its too messy

 

[Dbomb3]

better?

 

[ssbb_lover]

That's one sick atmosphere you've got there, bawm. Very nice bud.

 

[Bodine]

Any comments on mine?

 

[factoR]

Bodine: Since you made it like that, you dont want any CnC. Its for your own satisfaction.

Dbomb: Post these on AI! ;D. Well its cleaner. Flow,depth is nice along with the colors. Lighting needs a bit of work. Look at the edges of the lighting and fix that. They seems in layers. Do that and it will be nice.


GJ

 

[Bodine]

So in short.... it's bad?