Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

[Destiny]

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Holy ****, that is so awesome. I lovelovelovelovelove it.

 

[AndThen?]

ommgggggg celeestteeeeeeeeee
Awesome stuff there.

 

[Destiny]

I love them both. Especially the colored version.

 

[Celeste]

Thanks heaps! =)

 

[Gikoku Harakami]

Red/Black/White = Sex.

I really like the color combo you chose, Cellie. Although I actually like the Demi one more, it's more colorful and brings me in. Nicely done

 

[ProShooter]

This obviously isn't done, so what should I add?

By the way, there's a thin white border which you probably can't see because the space around it is white as well.

 

[Destiny]

This obviously isn't done, so what should I add?

By the way, there's a thin white border which you probably can't see because the space around it is white as well.

The render looks a bit stretched.

 

[Celeste]

Red/Black/White = Sex.

I really like the color combo you chose, Cellie. Although I actually like the Demi one more, it's more colorful and brings me in. Nicely done

Thank you! ;D
The Demi one was originally waaaaaaay bright so I decided to put a b&w gradient map over it set to darken D:

If it wasn't for y'all I wouldn't know to do that, so <33

 

[ProShooter]

Really? I downloaded it has 400x600

 

[Bliss]

This obviously isn't done, so what should I add?

By the way, there's a thin white border which you probably can't see because the space around it is white as well.

Ahh since i have experience with this render i shall C&C.
Well first the rising sun brush in the BG is a no go, get rid of it. It totally kills the flow of the render. Second get rid of the copied one with lower opacity in the BG. Also shrink the render a bit more, with that render the main thing you have to work with is flow, cuz of the position of the render.

 

[ProShooter]

good comments, but that will just leave me with the render lol. so what should I add?

 

[iRAWR]

Red/Black/White = Sex.

I really like the color combo you chose, Cellie. Although I actually like the Demi one more, it's more colorful and brings me in. Nicely done

Couldn't agree more. :O

 

[Bliss]

good comments, but that will just leave me with the render lol. so what should I add?

Thats up to you, think him flying. Just look at the render and picture, vision the piece before you create. Just keep the flow in mind.

 

[ProShooter]

yeah i can't come up with anything

 

[factoR]

well c4ds wont work with kanyes hat.

maybe a bit of smudging