Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

[Brawny]

lol, the quote is off the img.... I will probably make the "brawny" the same as the "captain" I need more time. I'm also working on a sports one so...

 

[Stranger]

hmm, well good luck :thumbsup:

 

[ssbb_lover]

hmm, well good luck :thumbsup:

You're not doing SOTW #3, Stranger?

You betta. It's the only way you get better; perfect practice makes perfect..

 

[Syntax]

Thank for the feedback on my Mario Vector Sig..

unfortunately for some reason my main computer seems to be broken and I haven't been able to sign on over the past two days...

 

[Stranger]

You're not doing SOTW #3, Stranger?

You betta. It's the only way you get better; perfect practice makes perfect..

hmm, well, since you said so, I'll give it a go

oh, and new sig:

please give honest critique, dont just be nice, like I said, i want to get better.

 

[Syntax]

Try blending the text in a bit more..

 

[Stranger]

ok. anything else? im a little worried about the render, i think i screwed with it a little too much.

 

[ssbb_lover]

ok. anything else? im a little worried about the render, i think i screwed with it a little too much.

1. It's out of proportion

2. Yes, you did screw with it too much, it kind of gives me a feeling like i'm getting stabbed in the eye tbh. I don't mean to be vain, but if you look at my sig (which wasn't even 1/4th done rrr: ) The effects I did to it make it looks bright, but it's not overwhelming. That's exactly what you need to do.

2. The render blends to much with the bg. I think you just duplicated the render a few times and smudged (correct me if I'm wrong), but you needed to add more effects to make the render stand out more.

3. Text takes up way too much of the sig, again, not intending to be vain, but look at the text in my sig. It actually isn't where I wanted it, but because of the file type I saved it as I can't work with it anymore...anyways. See how it's very subtle, BUT, you can still see it? It's like it's absent, yet it isn't at the same time. You CAN pull of big text in sigs (see especially Gymdawg's sigs, by going to his profile), but you just didn't here.

Good enough critique?

 

[Brawny]

woot, everything tyler said, but the "look at my sigs" don't apply to my current...... My text is huge. I meant it too.

 

[ssbb_lover]

woot, everything tyler said, but the "look at my sigs" don't apply to my current...... My text is huge. I meant it too.

But, see, you pulled it off. >.<

 

[Stranger]

ok, i'll see what i can do. thnx guys!

 

[Close]

New sig:

 

[Brawny]

I'm taken by your border styles....

Hm...there's something that I don't like in it, but I can't tell you exactly what....

Want to talk about mine close? lol, It was a quickie inside joke.

 

[Close]

Actually, I was testing styles out and this is an old one of mine, even though it says new though >.<, the text sucks.

And the sig of yours, - the text you added in is bad, lens flare is not a good thing in the middle, like you said an inside joke. , its funny.

 

[Stranger]

ok. new sig, and i kept in mind the things that you guys said. so critique please!

I think its actually decent this time, well, maybe.