Official Graphics Comments & Criticism

ssbb_lover said:
Still working on this one, but i'd appreciate critique anyway.

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I was trying to show Jam what could be done with this render. Thanks.

I like it quite alot. The only thing that lets it down is the Pen Tool. I feel you could've done better with it
 
Wii_Smurf said:
I like it quite alot. The only thing that lets it down is the Pen Tool. I feel you could've done better with it
More detailed critique on the pen tool please. I'd like to hear it. I also think it could be done better...still spent me a little while doing it.
 
Well I think It'd be better if you made it wrap around the gun better. Im guessing thats the effect you went for?
 
Wii_Smurf said:
Well I think It'd be better if you made it wrap around the gun better. Im guessing thats the effect you went for?
You're right. Do you just mean to make the spirals more circular, opposed to ovals or what?...
 
How about a bright light thingy in the gun so it looks kinda like a bullet?!

I did that in the one I tried.. looked cool
 
Well, More like it's wrapped around the gun, And it would just take the shape of the gun wouldn't it? Though more rounded I think
 
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I got bored so made a brushed metal with the text Full Metal Captain, I am hoping to make more sig's related to 'Full Metal Captain' and make a sort of persona around it.
 
Syntax said:
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Got bored... decided to make a simple signature..

All of those lights over the car are a bit odd... it makes the render more confusing. Maybe, change the lights opacity, or try to change the layer setting to soft light.
I've notice that you work alot with stocks, you can improve alot in sig making if you try to work more with the stocks that you use in the sigs.
 
Lmao, nice text there Syntax. I kind of get sick of you using that Sharpen + Layer mode on Lighten combo (i'm pretty sure that's what you do).

You've used it on every sig you've ever made I think. :/
 
*BUMPAGE*

I'm liking this one:

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Better than this one:

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Thoughts?
 

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